Celtic Heroes

YouTube.com/th3n3wb13 I have just made a YouTube video and I would love for you all to check it out! I am trying to get the name known via videos and I had people watch and subscribe it would help me and Celtic Heroes in general! Thanks all in advance!!

-cloud World epona
P.s. its my first commentary so dont be too harsh

Needs a little bit more work and clearness. Mabye some effects (spruce up each scene) for each video.
Just some ideas

It's ok though

its not a bad effort to be honest with you. Just needs a little more tweaking and effects. Overall, considering its a bit of a prototype it isn't bad at all.

"ahh and its really fun"

Lol all in all i think you should have turned down the brightness on your ipod and planed out the video before taking it but nice job hope to see more people spread the word this way.