Ahaha was wondering when u would come lol
The Warrior's face looks stupid, you copycat
Yeah ik, sadely it's my actual drawing skills :/ drawing a head+neck only is fine but putting it on a body always look weird when i do it :/ It'll improve on the next pages nw , let me learn haha.
But ty for the feedback
Thing is, at this sluggish rate of 1 page per week, you'll need around 5 months to complete 20 pages (roughly a chapter). You should increase the drawing speed. If you can, try to make it around 5pg/wk instead of 1pg/wk. If you go to school, draw in class like I always do
AH AH AH
sadely can't because of time :/ i do all the drafts in school ( i did all for the next page this morning
, sneak peak of the first pannel :
And ill do the final drawing tonight. But this is only the easy part lol
it take me 3 to 4 times for the inking ( as all u do cannot be erased, need to be precised and sure of what you do)
and then the photoshop part...oh god...i never used photoshop before so it took me the whole week hahah
So yeah, actually ill stick to 1 page a week, mabe will do more in the future (eg 2) but can't speed up more :/
And i'll be 10-12 page for this short chapter. Got the story for the second but unsure yet to do it..anyway it wont be soon
And you don't put exclamation marks before the actual word unless it's like in these examples:
!! That hurts! Hey why did you hit me blah blah blah....
Or
..!! What was that? A meteorite? I gotta see it!
Mmmh ya you are right, ill change those dialogs anyway! ty for info!
And was there an oil spillage or what? Water isn't that dark. It's supposed to be more of a lighter color, but definitely not white or black. Light grey is better
Got you point, now you tell it i see it lol
ill change it later once ill do the photoshop of page 2
Thanks!!
Warrior starting gloves have steel and leather. Color in the leather, and lightly shade in the steel! Also, there's a second steel plate on it.
His boots aren't white. They're dark brown.
Oh ya right! I had a hard time doing those tone but you are truely right, ill try to change it either
TY
The red cloth doesn't cover that much of his torso.
Then look at the Warrior's Greaves. The metal playes aren't that spaced out, but in fact like an inch or two away from each other.
Ya you are right, tho i can't change it on this page, ill do better on the next one
However, overall the drawing's great
Thanks for all man
TY hehe! manga are soo fun anyway
Oooooo
this looks interesting :3
TYYY;)
