Celtic Heroes

half your unfathomable was stolen from teen bop rappers you listen you.

1. I dont listen to rap
2. Never heare a rapper sing about leonidas or a druid or pvp so is there some MMO rapper ive never heard before.
3. Being burnt gives you the right to be defensive so its cool.

Didn't feel burnt at all. Infact your rap didn't have any insults. Mine was full of them. How can I be burnt if I wasn't insulted.

Didn't feel burnt at all. Infact your rap didn't have any insults. Mine was full of them. How can I be burnt if I wasn't insulted.

I dont need to be insulting to burn you. I downgraded your rap why keeping my cool. Just cause you imply insults on a personal lvl doesnt make you good quite frankly it shows the lack of material you have. A good rap is about a life aspect the problems and trials you have in life that others can compare to and giveing them a way to over come. Take a country song add a quick beat and a rap style and its rap. A good spit whitch is what we were doing has nothing to do with personal insults either. Its the tearing down the other person spit to the point that they cant rap back cause they used all thier materal and dont want to repeat themselves. All in all music has nothing to do with insults its an art that is based off of emotions chech your theory before you step.

Taeostine is full of himself.

Well i wanna keep this topic on track so... Im gunna re post my rapp despite my shyness!

Title: (Still in process)
Origin: Wrote this for my brother when he went to jail he needed a pick-me-up thought i would make him one.

Please hear me out i got a story to tell,
The way i live my life i know im going to hell.
But throughtout my whole life what i regret the most,
Is taking the easy way out deciding to coast.
Through life with no ambitions no hopes or dreams,
Living simple is not as easy as it seams.
Because you got no family not a single friend,
No one there to help your broken heart mend.
You just lose thought, lose mind, lose love, lose sight,
Of whats wong in your life and what is right,
Just listen to me its never to lait to fight.
Cause ya/ broke broke down and ya/ job is never done,
And in your life there aint no time for fun.
Dont get me wrong cause i know its hard,
Youve got a slim chance at drawing the right apple.
So dont give up i know what your going through,
But the solution isnt based in what ya say its what ya do...

Note: Line 12 verse 6 there are (/) after the ya's.. This is a stopper as you read it creats a continued rythem so if you didnt re-read and add a pause to the beat it creats a whole new rythem for that line mixing it up some in the verse.

This is not the opening stanza this is the beginning chorus The reason there is no title is because there is no opening stanza. I cant think of something to open with that corrisponds with the rest of the song. Please feel free to lave your constructive critisism and feel free to be harsh if need be.

You don't neeed to quote me the post was the one right before..
I find it hard to belive what you say because you said you don't listen to rap so tell me how you kniw so much.
You discredited everything you said in that last post.
In rap battles btw- it is the purpose of dissing the other person personall and lyrically.

I dont listen to rap not saying i havnt and not saying that it doesnt go through my ipod shuffle list every so often.

Im taking te time to edit this theres no sence in arguing with someone who thinks he king. Please leave your comments on my spits and leave some of your own its fun just type what comes to mind it doesnt even have to rhyme.

Well i wanna keep this topic on track so... Im gunna re post my rapp despite my shyness!

Title: (Still in process)
Origin: Wrote this for my brother when he went to jail he needed a pick-me-up thought i would make him one.

Please hear me out i got a story to tell,
The way i live my life i know im going to hell.
But throughtout my whole life what i regret the most,
Is taking the easy way out deciding to coast.
Through life with no ambitions no hopes or dreams,
Living simple is not as easy as it seams.
Because you got no family not a single friend,
No one there to help your broken heart mend.
You just lose thought, lose mind, lose love, lose sight,
Of whats wong in your life and what is right,
Just listen to me its never to lait to fight.
Cause ya/ broke broke down and ya/ job is never done,
And in your life there aint no time for fun.
Dont get me wrong cause i know its hard,
Youve got a slim chance at drawing the right apple.
So dont give up i know what your going through,
But the solution isnt based in what ya say its what ya do...

Note: Line 12 verse 6 there are (/) after the ya's.. This is a stopper as you read it creats a continued rythem so if you didnt re-read and add a pause to the beat it creats a whole new rythem for that line mixing it up some in the verse.

This is not the opening stanza this is the beginning chorus The reason there is no title is because there is no opening stanza. I cant think of something to open with that corrisponds with the rest of the song. Please feel free to lave your constructive critisism and feel free to be harsh if need be.

It's good

Why do your raps alway get off track,
Insulting my family that unfathomable is whack.
Speaking of your Druid who's got no game on me,
Im lvl 89 and rising rapidly.
I've got 525 healing with my natures touch,
Dont step to my lvl you'll just be a crutch.
You cant put me 7 feat under cause I'll never go down,
Im in every single world and I'm taking the Kings crown.
Just like Leonidas I will make the GOD KING bleed,
So TAEO heres your chance take the time to pleed.

Sorry to say it taeo, you have nothing
#1 fan nodnarb

Make that #2 here

Imma really crappy rappa so I just wanna say
Keep mean comments to ya self cuz I'm just here to play
Pep schooled taeo like he was a frickin professor
At a college pwnin a stupid schizo cross dressa
when pep drops a rhyme taeo's out on the run
Cuz peps bazooka rhymes make his look like a squirt gun
So get outta peps house taeo he's just to good.
You think ur his rival? He's fire, you're wood.