Celtic Heroes

the cantorix submisiion:

A long time ago there are evil sorcerers called teachers that created evil weapons powered by the power of crom,
what are these weapons called? they are called " textbooks", this word shakes fear into the hearts of every student out there.
now, we signed a peace treaty that make equality and freedom but that ancient
history is unforgettable.

It was the year 2001. a evil teacher called a principal rose to power and conquered students all around the world and forced
them to go to this cocentration camp called " school". it was bad times. kids were sent with heavy textbooks carrying the evil powers
of crom. then, they introduced even more effective textbooks carrying the essense of crom himself.

there are small people working under the principal called the administration people and the vice principle.
then, there are business managers and other teachers. in addition to the power of crom, there is a teacher vote in which'
crom will power a teacher selected filling him/her with evil power by the benedicitons of crom. but that is a long time ago.
they issued a assignment punnishmetn called "homework for peace and freedom"
and so thats our history.

its kind of weird but the evil teachers part was funny right?

the cantorix submisiion:

A long time ago there are evil sorcerers called teachers that created evil weapons powered by the power of crom,
what are these weapons called? they are called " textbooks", this word shakes fear into the hearts of every student out there.
now, we signed a peace treaty that make equality and freedom but that ancient
history is unforgettable.

It was the year 2001. a evil teacher called a principal rose to power and conquered students all around the world and forced
them to go to this cocentration camp called " school". it was bad times. kids were sent with heavy textbooks carrying the evil powers
of crom. then, they introduced even more effective textbooks carrying the essense of crom himself.

there are small people working under the principal called the administration people and the vice principle.
then, there are business managers and other teachers. in addition to the power of crom, there is a teacher vote in which'
crom will power a teacher selected filling him/her with evil power by the benedicitons of crom. but that is a long time ago.
they issued a assignment punnishmetn called "homework for peace and freedom"
and so thats our history.

its kind of weird but the evil teachers part was funny right?

The Story of Branwen:
I am the king of Camelot. I run the country by day; be an assassin by night. I own the vast reaches of the country called 'Camelot', although there are many fiefdoms ruled by various lords and ladies, I am the most important. All that oppose me are struck down by the mighty army of my ally (Julius Ceaser) and myself. There have been many rebellions in the past month (49 by my reckoning) but all the rebels have been disposed of. At night during my training for being an assassin, visions strike me about the near fu-
Come o young one into the vision of light.... I'm suddenly surrounded by 8 people. I have to defeat them if I wish to become the almighty assassin, worthy of defeating Crom himself!
More to come..

                           This is the story of the squad at greygorge 
     
    Arrows flying through the sky screams of victory and terror this is war. Then as all the adrenaline was leaving my body I realized we are losing! I thought I have to choices save my self and run of fight by my comrades and die here I decided to retreat. I told me squad members next two me to come with I was glad the chose to. We escaped the battle field and found a cliff we hiked up then we saw the last few warriors trying to retreat they were easily chopped down by the arrows and daggers of the conchat kerns and rangers. Luckly we saw our commander Cullen and our leader isla and a few other members of our clan get away. 
     It was late at night the third day we all were still worried about the conchat warriors seeing us. Then as I was on guard duty I saw our commander walking to our old castle none of the conchat warriors attacked him. I knew he was the traitor that let the conchat know our battle positions. That morning I told my comrades how he betrayed us none of then thought the same way I did.
     I was furious but I couldn't do any thing about it I decided to make them all do some dangerous "chores" I send one of them to scout out the stonevale area. I also made some of them get a notice to the main camp. It worked I hoped we would get help until a notice came telling us to attack the conchat main camp. I wouldn't this will be our rebellion.
     It was a few weeks later a ranger named kolare came and brought us medical supplies I thanked him but I didn't know him much so I kept my secrets to my self. He told me how helped save Lirs reach. It was a few days later he came back this time much better weapons. He was told to talk to me about killing extremely strong enemies then I talked to him about Cullen betraying us he said he would help me prove it! 
     His first mission was to clear the bridge and kill some trappers he successfully did it I was amazed. I asked him to help free some prisoners he came back with a letter the proof I needed I told he to show it to Isla. The next week was odd we could hear the war but we couldn't do anything about it until we saw our troops losing a battle we knew it was our chance to join this war!
    Me and my men charged swords lashing out faster than lightning my fire balls and ice shards doing more damage then 20 coldseers attacking all at once. When we got to our troops we were all given medals and a feast in honor because we saved our people twice! But the war wasn't over  yet my squad was sent to take back the castle and kill artisal the invisible. He was extremely strong but we bested him and we found some covers and bindings of a book.
     The rest of the troops got to us and we were given our last mission it was to give info to a messenger the messenger want info on how to get to Stonevale. I asked him why he said he needed to talk to Kolare I told him about Kolare he was amazed and thanked me. Then I was promoted to general of the entire army and found a wonderful wife. Then my son was born
     "Daddy what happened next!!!" 
     "That's up to you goodnight"

   End 
By: Kolare

The story of SirNick

Please forgive all spelling errors and poor ability to tell a good story


Hello I am SirNick a young warrior who's taking adventures everywhere from the land of skyrim to the worlds of Celtic.
When I was just a small child my parents abandoned me all alone in the cold winter mountains.
I was rescued by a Druid who I have come to know as my mother.
Her name is Jessica.
Since I was young I have felt I was called to do more than just be another man in this world,I wanted to be a hero,someone who kept peace in the world and kept the balance of good and evil.
At the age of thirteen I left home to fight in the war against an evil Orc army.
When I returned my town was in pieces,all the buildings had been burned down and my dear mother had died.
From that moment on I swore to get revenge on all who do evil.
I trained myself to be stronger and decided that I needed to have a lot of health to be a good warrior.
You know this as being a tank.
I will not go into much detail about what happened but for past few months I have been having dreams... Visions.
I see my mother and she's calling me to a new place.
A place where there are people hurting people in a war against evil.
She was calling me to be a highlander warrior.
I traveled quiet a ways to a place know as lirs reach.
I was welcomed with a feast for they said they were expecting me.
As my battles go on daily I know my mother would be proud.

I... Am... A Celtic heroe

Wow you guys, such cool writing.....now I've got to make the decision....well, ok there will be one poem winner and one story winner and one overall winner. But there are only two entries so far, so I'll wait for some more.

Oh wait, there's more!!!! Cool! gotta make a decision, now...

once upon a time i wrote this

NOW. THE TIME HAS COME.....TO REVEAL THE WINNER. THERE WILL BE ONLY ONE PRIZE CUZ THERE'S ONLY ONE POEM SO THERE WILL JUST BE AN OVERALL WINNER.... OK, now to the results...
AND THE WINNER IS.....BA DA DA....MIHINDU!!!!!!
Your story was so captivating and I LOVE long stories!
Congratulations!!!

                           This is the story of the squad at greygorge 
     
    Arrows flying through the sky screams of victory and terror this is war. Then as all the adrenaline was leaving my body I realized we are losing! I thought I have to choices save my self and run of fight by my comrades and die here I decided to retreat. I told me squad members next two me to come with I was glad the chose to. We escaped the battle field and found a cliff we hiked up then we saw the last few warriors trying to retreat they were easily chopped down by the arrows and daggers of the conchat kerns and rangers. Luckly we saw our commander Cullen and our leader isla and a few other members of our clan get away. 
     It was late at night the third day we all were still worried about the conchat warriors seeing us. Then as I was on guard duty I saw our commander walking to our old castle none of the conchat warriors attacked him. I knew he was the traitor that let the conchat know our battle positions. That morning I told my comrades how he betrayed us none of then thought the same way I did.
     I was furious but I couldn't do any thing about it I decided to make them all do some dangerous "chores" I send one of them to scout out the stonevale area. I also made some of them get a notice to the main camp. It worked I hoped we would get help until a notice came telling us to attack the conchat main camp. I wouldn't this will be our rebellion.
     It was a few weeks later a ranger named kolare came and brought us medical supplies I thanked him but I didn't know him much so I kept my secrets to my self. He told me how helped save Lirs reach. It was a few days later he came back this time much better weapons. He was told to talk to me about killing extremely strong enemies then I talked to him about Cullen betraying us he said he would help me prove it! 
     His first mission was to clear the bridge and kill some trappers he successfully did it I was amazed. I asked him to help free some prisoners he came back with a letter the proof I needed I told he to show it to Isla. The next week was odd we could hear the war but we couldn't do anything about it until we saw our troops losing a battle we knew it was our chance to join this war!
    Me and my men charged swords lashing out faster than lightning my fire balls and ice shards doing more damage then 20 coldseers attacking all at once. When we got to our troops we were all given medals and a feast in honor because we saved our people twice! But the war wasn't over  yet my squad was sent to take back the castle and kill artisal the invisible. He was extremely strong but we bested him and we found some covers and bindings of a book.
     The rest of the troops got to us and we were given our last mission it was to give info to a messenger the messenger want info on how to get to Stonevale. I asked him why he said he needed to talk to Kolare I told him about Kolare he was amazed and thanked me. Then I was promoted to general of the entire army and found a wonderful wife. Then my son was born
     "Daddy what happened next!!!" 
     "That's up to you goodnight"

   End 
By: Kolare

nice but the dangerous chores reminded me of that one guy who was making people do dangerous chores in shalemont to try to get them killed. But i really liked how you stuck to subject matter within the Celtic heroes storyline.