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Poem written by me regarding the trayvon martin case

Posted: Sat Aug 30, 2014 6:41 pm
by Based_Shaft
I was not the bullet
I was not the gun
I was not the juror that set the shooter free

I was not the trigger
I was not the hate
Nor was not the judge but still, you judge me?

I was not the black family mourning for the death: "ohh somebody shot our children
Lordy what we do now"
And I was not the verdict

I was not the shooter
I was not the gun
So raviel u should be cool
While we're all here at school

Re: Poem written by me regarding the trayvon martin case

Posted: Sat Aug 30, 2014 7:48 pm
by Criminal
Roses are red
Violets are blue
I hate you
Die away from me.

Re: Poem written by me regarding the trayvon martin case

Posted: Sat Aug 30, 2014 9:04 pm
by mM dakota marry me
did you seriously write "u" instead of "you" in a POEM what a disrespect *** hell stop being lazy make some effort

ps nice poem of course

Re: Poem written by me regarding the trayvon martin case

Posted: Sat Aug 30, 2014 9:22 pm
by Curry30423
did you seriously write "u" instead of "you" in a POEM what a disrespect ****** hell stop being lazy make some effort

ps nice poem of course
Yea he lazy! He forgot to add 2 letters!

Re: Poem written by me regarding the trayvon martin case

Posted: Sat Aug 30, 2014 9:24 pm
by Curry30423
Roses are red
Violets are blue
I hate you
Die away from me.
Here's mine :D :

Roses are red
Violets are blue
Get the f**k away from me
Cuz I hate you

:3 Ima poemist._.

Re: Poem written by me regarding the trayvon martin case

Posted: Sat Aug 30, 2014 9:36 pm
by Based_Shaft
Roses are red
Violets are blue
I hate you
Die away from me.
Here's mine :D :

Roses are red
Violets are blue
Get the f**k away from me
Cuz I hate you

:3 Ima poemist._.
Roses are red
Violets are blue
I didnt shoot trayvon Martin
So dont blame all the white ppl for it

Re: Poem written by me regarding the trayvon martin case

Posted: Sat Aug 30, 2014 11:11 pm
by mM dakota marry me
curry if this was sarcasm it just makes me feel like the whole poem is crap after reading something like this even if it's just two letters
my opinion thx the poem is still good ofc xoxoxoxx

Re: Poem written by me regarding the trayvon martin case

Posted: Sat Aug 30, 2014 11:22 pm
by Liviticus
If you do your research, the first use of the letter "U" in place if "You" was used by William Shakespeare in one of his poems.

The more you know ;)

Re: Poem written by me regarding the trayvon martin case

Posted: Sun Aug 31, 2014 5:34 pm
by Invaded
Yes but the kid was a thug just like the Fergusson Missouri guy. I just wonder why is it whenever a black person is shot it makes the world headlines but a white person is murdered by a group of blacks and not a word is spoken. Its a shame :/ so many people die everyday yet we only care about the white vs black hate crimes. People are starving everyday yet we waste money on saving the world from global warming. I hate to bring politics into this but there are alot more bigger issues we face. Stupid things we waste time on in today's society. I really wish I was born in the 1950s or earlier

Re: Poem written by me regarding the trayvon martin case

Posted: Sun Aug 31, 2014 6:08 pm
by PurpleRain
To me it doesn't matter what color race you are. You were an unarmed human being. No kid deserves to lay dying on a pavement black or white. Heck he was my age.