Although it's cool that you're trying, spamming your own thread with your rhymes to boost your post count, then making another one when people stop reading the original it is a tad bit sad and I die a bit inside for you.
Just a little bit.
And with a pinch of constructive criticism, they aren't that great. You do need to work on them. But not on forums. On paper. And try to rap about stuff that concerns you in real life.
I understand it's all for a bit of fun, but it's getting annoying now.
However, when you get something good or you think is good, feel free to share it. I encourage you to do so.
But it's alright, because the colour red is awesome, is easy on the eyes and doesn't scream for attention.
Thanks for listening.
PS. Don't take it too personally, If it wasn't me who said something, it would have been someone else eventually.